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My tears fell
Wrapped up in memories...
I lost track of time
I felt so lost
And my tears fell
The day was cool and clear
All was peaceful
I remember it all to well
I miss you so...
And my tears fell
Wrapped up in memories…
Now I think back to that day
And how the first crash looked like an accident
But now I know,
It was an attack
Now I know the truth
And then the second plane hit…
Your panic-stricken face looking down at me from the 100th floor
It was almost as though you knew,
Knew that the end was near…
Wrapped up in memories...
The explosions I remember all feel so real
Like they keep happening over and over
And my tears fell
I am lost without you…
But you are gone,
Gone with the Twin Towers
And my still tears fall…
Wrapped up in memories...
I will never forget you, or the terrible attack of 9/11,
You will always have a place in my heart,
Always.
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9 11 poemby Dark-Zangoose

Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse©2010-2015 Dark-Zangoose
done1 remake of my old poem icy tears. its like a little memorial to the 9/11 attack in 2001. any good?
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ChibiChump Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
This is such a beautiful and meaningful yet sad poem, great job! Keep it up! :)
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Dark-Zangoose Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2010
thanks :3
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a-dehn Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010  Student Writer
I really like the phrase "My tears fell/Wrapped up in memories"...its a great way to start this off.
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Dark-Zangoose Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
thanks ^^
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a-dehn Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010  Student Writer
No problem
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Shewroteinblue Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:( so sad! This poem is wonderful, good job!
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Dark-Zangoose Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
thanks *^^*
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Shewroteinblue Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
of course.
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Dark-Zangoose Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
:D
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Shewroteinblue Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:boogie:
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Dark-Zangoose Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
lol xD :woohoo:
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Shewroteinblue Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
hehe
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Dark-Zangoose Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
:iconlaplz:
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West-117 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
I'm glad that someone seemed to remember the attack, recently where I'm at it seems as if people are treating 9/11 as just another day. I understand the attack was 10 years ago but it still hasn't been that long.
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Dark-Zangoose Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
thanks :)
i hate to admit it but this actually is an assignment for my social studies teacher, but thank you all the same ^^
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West-117 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
Lol I still like it. :)
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Dark-Zangoose Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
lol [thats my line xD]
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